Question

8．進入高三以來，同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力倍增．就此問題，最近你班開展了一次以"壓力"為主題的班會．在班會上，大家各抒己見，就如何緩解壓力提出了自己的看法．請你為學(xué)校英文報寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點包括：
1．壓力的來源．
2．壓力與成敗的關(guān)系．
3．你自己的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：不少于120詞；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Three students．
                                                     

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We are anxious that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．
高分句型二：
Honestly speaking，on one hand，pressure is the source of motivation to success，which can contribute to personal progress．
句型一that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．該句是一個賓語從句，該賓語從句位于形容詞之后，that在從句中只做引導(dǎo)詞，不作句子成分．、
句型二 which can contribute to personal progress．該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，在該從句中which做主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的整個主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Two students．As the university entrance exam is approaching nearer，we all feel the pressure is piling up．（壓力來源）We are anxious that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．（高分句型一）
  Honestly speaking，on one hand，pressure is the source of motivation to success，which can contribute to personal progress．（高分句型二）On the other hand，too much pressure can lead to failure．In that case，approaches to solving pressure seem of vital importance．As for me，communication counts．It can help me express my emotion and get relief．
  To begin with，there must be sorrows we can't go through by ourselves，which need sharing with others．Furthermore，by communicating with parents and teachers，we can get more supports．In one word，the more you show your troubles，the better others understand you．As a result，you are more likely to get help and improve yourself．（發(fā)表看法）

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