Question

17．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下句作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每處中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
It was 2：10 in the afternoon when I entered the classroom．I was  surprising to see our teacher operating the video camer．Most of us have never been in front of a video camer before，but we were very nervous．As for myself，I had once faced it at home．My uncle shot as we were celebrating for my sister's birthday．However，this was complete different．
We had to talk about our articles as if we were reading news on TV．The funny thing was every time I tried to face the cameras and talked about my article，I forgot the article and couldn't help look down at it．It was a quite different experience for me，thanks to our teacher．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述我們面對(duì)攝像機(jī)時(shí)感到緊張，雖然我經(jīng)歷過(guò)一次這種場(chǎng)合在我的堂妹過(guò)生日時(shí)，但每次面對(duì)攝像機(jī)時(shí)，也是忘記了我的文章，因?yàn)檫@是一種完全不同的經(jīng)歷．

解答 It was 2：10 in the afternoon when I entered the classroom．I was  surprising to see our teacher operating the video camer．Most of us have never been in front of a video camer before，but we were very nervous．As for myself，I had once faced itat home．My uncle shot as we were celebrating for my sister's birthday．However，this was complete different．
We had to talk about our articles as if we were reading news on TV．The funny thing was∧every time I tried to face the cameras and talked about my article，I forgot the article and couldn't help look down at it．It was a quite different experience for me，thanks to our teacher．
詳解：
1．surprising改為surprised 考查過(guò)去分詞．過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)表示人所處的心理狀態(tài)或情感變化．
2．have改為had 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)句子的意思，表示在"過(guò)去的過(guò)去"，所以要用過(guò)去完成時(shí)．
3．but改為so 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意：因?yàn)闆](méi)有在攝像機(jī)前面過(guò)，所以很緊張．此處表示因果關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折有關(guān)系．
4．it改為one 考查代詞．根據(jù)句子的意思，此處指的是在家里用過(guò)"一部攝像機(jī)"，表示同類(lèi)不同物，所以要用one．
5．去掉for 考查動(dòng)詞用法．celebrate意為"慶祝"，是及物動(dòng)詞，后接賓語(yǔ)時(shí)不帶介詞．
6．complete改為completely 考查副詞．根據(jù)句子的結(jié)構(gòu)，要用副詞修飾形容詞different，形容詞completely的副詞是completely．
7．加that 考查連詞．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句，且表語(yǔ)從句是完整的，用that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句，that不可省略．
8．cameras改為camera 考查名詞．camera用單數(shù)形式，而非復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．talked改為talk 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．talk與face并列，其前省略不定式符號(hào)to．
10．look改為looking 考查動(dòng)名詞．couldn't help意為"禁不住"，后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)要用動(dòng)名詞形式．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．