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15．調(diào)查表明，有許多青少年有不吃早餐的習(xí)慣．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
注意：1．不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫．
2．詞數(shù)100左右；
3．參考詞匯：苗條的：slim能量：energy．
A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast．
There are different reasons for this．Some students study late into the night and get up late，so there is not enough time to have breakfast．（高分句型一）Some students do not have breakfast to save money to play games on the Internet．Besides，some girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．If teenagers often don't have breakfast，it is bad for their health．（高分句型二）They will feel sleepy in class．It will have bad effects on their memories and studies．
In fact，breakfast plays an important part．It can provide us with 30% of the energy that the body needs the whole day．（高分句型三）To keep fit，teenagers should start their day with a regular breakfast．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇傳統(tǒng)作文，中文提示即文章的主要內(nèi)容，考生切入容易，內(nèi)容貼近考生生活，考試有話可說(shuō)，可以有感而發(fā)．具有一定的生活性．要求學(xué)生根據(jù)中文提示，分析不吃早餐的原因，后果和根據(jù)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象提出一定的建議，考試要在表達(dá)的時(shí)候適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯，句型和各種連接詞，使文章連貫，自然，句型多樣化，有利于分?jǐn)?shù)檔次的提高．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：have breakfast吃早餐；get up late起床晚；play games玩游戲；Besides另外；be bad for 對(duì)…有害；In fact事實(shí)上；keep fit保持健康；
Some students study late into the night and get up late，so there is not enough time to have breakfast．（高分句型一）
If teenagers often don't have breakfast，it is bad for their health．（高分句型二）
It can provide us with 30% of the energy that the body needs the whole day．（高分句型三）

解答 A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast．
      There are different reasons for this．Some students study late into the night and get up late，so there is not enough time to have breakfast．（高分句型一）Some students do not have breakfast to save money to play games on the Internet．Besides，some girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast．If teenagers often don't have breakfast，it is bad for their health．（高分句型二）They will feel sleepy in class．It will have bad effects on their memories and studies．
       In fact，breakfast plays an important part．It can provide us with 30% of the energy that the body needs the whole day．（高分句型三）To keep fit，teenagers should start their day with a regular breakfast．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．