【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表有關(guān)信息，介紹第一個(gè)在NBA打球的華裔Chinese--American球員——林書(shū)豪。

參考詞匯： 1州冠軍.the state championship 2.哈佛Harvard 3.賽場(chǎng) court

姓名 林書(shū)豪 Jeremy Lin 出生年月 1988年8月23 日

出生地 美國(guó)加州（California) 身高 19 1厘米

體重 91公斤

主要事跡 上高中時(shí)，帶領(lǐng)校隊(duì)獲得州冠軍；

哈佛大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，2010年開(kāi)始在NBA打球。

影響 2012年2月，他在NBA賽場(chǎng)上的神奇表現(xiàn)引起全世界的關(guān)注，現(xiàn)被認(rèn)為是世界上最受歡迎的球星之一。

【寫(xiě)作要求】 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫

【答案】

One possible version:

Born in California ,the US on August 23rd,1988，Jeremy Lin is the first Chinese-American to play in the NBA. He is 191cm in height and weighs 91kgs. When he was in high school, Jeremy Lin led his school team to win the state championship. After graduating from Harvard University, he began to play in the NBA in 2010. In February2012,Jeremy Lin attracted the world's attention because of his wonderful performance on the basketball court and he is regarded as one of the most popular players in the world.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作是介紹第一個(gè)在NBA打球的華裔球員—林書(shū)豪。因?yàn)榻榻B的是學(xué)生們較熟悉的人物，而且提供的信息較全，所以學(xué)生們不至于無(wú)話(huà)可說(shuō)。但是要求只用五句話(huà)表述出來(lái)，這就要求學(xué)生有較高的語(yǔ)言組織能力，應(yīng)該適當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句或者短語(yǔ)等幫助把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚全面。此外還要注意介紹人物時(shí)的先后順序和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】此篇書(shū)面表達(dá)用多樣化的句式結(jié)構(gòu)涵蓋了所有提供的信息，比如非謂語(yǔ)Born in California,US on August 23rd,1988，時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When he was in high school,介詞短語(yǔ)After graduating from Harvard University和最后很長(zhǎng)的一個(gè)并列句。這些都顯示了作者非常高的遣詞造句、組織語(yǔ)言的能力。

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