Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是尚德中學高二的學生李華，你的英國筆友Tom正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：

一、通常方式

1．邀請好友舉行生日聚會 2．贈送生日禮物，表達生日祝福3.聚餐，吃蛋糕，唱歌，跳舞

二、我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由（至少說明一種方式和理由）

課題：subject research

*詞數(shù)120

Dear Tom,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.

Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息來說明中國人過生日的方式。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如but the most common way is to hold a birthday party是非謂語短語做賓語。at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing是定語從句此外，文章還使用了大量短語for example，in this way，in return for等。