Question

假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示給某報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勎覈�農(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的原因以及你的看法。
失學(xué)原因：
1．學(xué)費(fèi)太高，使許多貧困家庭的孩子不得不輟學(xué)；
2．許多家長希望孩子能幫助大人早點(diǎn)賺錢；
3．一些人認(rèn)為女孩上學(xué)無用。
你的看法：兒童是祖國的未來，社會(huì)和家長都要重視兒童的學(xué)校教育。
注意：1.文章應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，但不要逐字翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)100左右。       3.文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)。
Dear Editor,
Now in the countryside of China, many children are dropping out of school. …………
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
A possible version:
Dear Editor,
Now in the countryside of China, many children are dropping out of school. One of the reasons is that school fees are too high for many poor families. Another reason is that some parents are so short-sighted that they are eager to let their children earn money for the family. Worse still, some people hold the idea that it is useless for girls to go to school. As a result, many girls have to stay at home and do housework instead of studying at school.
In my opinion, / To my understanding, children today will play an important part in the future of our country. The whole society, especially parents, should give children the right to be educated.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，要點(diǎn)和信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于書信類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。