Question

10．假定你是李華，外教Elva將在下學(xué)期開設(shè)一門英語選修課，學(xué)校為此征求各班學(xué)生的意見．請你就此情況給Elva寫一封建議信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．建議開設(shè)關(guān)于英美報刊閱讀的選修課．
2．理由：了解世界大事；提高閱讀理解能力；激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)熱情；了解不同的文化
注意：1．詞數(shù)100-120左右．
   2．不必寫出選修課的具體名稱．
   3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入詞數(shù)．
建議詞匯：comprehension 理解  passion 熱情
Dear Elva，
How are things going？What a surprise it is to hear you'll develop an optional course next term!Therefore，our school is seeking suggestions from us students．
                                                       
We would be very grateful if our humble suggestion received your favorable consideration．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封建議信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信目的；二建議開設(shè)關(guān)于英美報刊閱讀的選修課以及理由；三表示感激．
高分句型：
1．Firstly，it enables us to know current affairs in the world very well，through which we can keep pace with the times．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句；enable sb to do表示"使某人能做某事"；keep pace with 表示"和…保持同步"．
首先，它能夠讓我們了解世界時事，從而讓我們和時代同步．
2．Thirdly，reading various articles written by native speakers provides us ready access to rich，fresh and practical language，which should further arouse our passion for English．句子里reading various articles 是動名詞做主語； written by native speakers 是主語的定語；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句．
第三，閱讀本地人寫的不同的文章可以使我們有機(jī)會接近豐富的，新鮮的，實用的語言，從而激起我們對于英語的學(xué)習(xí)熱情．

解答 Dear Elva
       How are things going？What a surprise it is to hear that you'll develop an optional course next term!Therefore，our school is seeking suggestions from us students．（點明書信目的）
       As far as I'm concerned，most classmates really expect you to offer Selected British and American Newspaper Readings．The reasons are as follows．Firstly，it enables us to know current affairs in the world very well，through which we can keep pace with the times．【高分句型一】Secondly，we can improve reading comprehension as well as enlarge vocabulary．Thirdly，reading various articles written by native speakers provides us ready access to rich，fresh and practical language，which should further arouse our passion for English．【高分句型二】In addition，we will learn what we can't learn from the textbooks such as different cultures and customs．In this way，it will help to broaden our horizon and open our views．All in all，we will certainly benefit from it greatly whatever course it is．（建議開設(shè)關(guān)于英美報刊閱讀的選修課以及理由）
        We would be very grateful if our humble suggestion received your favorable consideration．（表示感激）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua．

點評 考查提綱類作文．
我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來．動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．