假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10 處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（夷），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2援只充許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起） 不計分。

Today is Tom’s 70th birthday, but there is anybody with him．He feels very disappointing．His sons didn’t care for him on this special day．Although the cakes are very delicious, but he doesn’t want to touch it．He just wants his children come and see him．Nowadays, many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents．But blood is thick than water．Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty．Thus, we should and must bring happy to them when they become old．

 

1.anybody 改成nobody

2.disappointing改成disappointed

3.didn't 改成don’t

4.去掉but

5.it 改成them

6.children ∧to

7.which改成 that

8.thick改成 thicker

9.for 改成with

10.happy 改成happiness

【解析】

試題分析：文章從湯姆的孤單的70歲生日，聯(lián)想到現(xiàn)在的年輕人很少看望父母，告訴年輕人父母的不容易，要多花時間陪陪父母，給他們帶來快樂。

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