Question

【題目】假設你是李華，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內容包括：

1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。

參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）

注意：

1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning , everyone,

I’m Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycle”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems, such as air pollution and traffic jams .

How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy –saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !

Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：假設你是李華，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講 稿，主要內容包括：1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；2.騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

【亮點說明】

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life.非限制性定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做結果狀語堪稱經典結合；As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution.固定句式和動名詞作定語運用恰到好處；let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !祈使句簡潔明了；另外However, For one thing, For another, What’s more, Therefore,顯得文章結構嚴謹，層次分明，段落清晰，不拘一格。