6．假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李華，你校英語俱樂部最近正在舉辦主題為"你最想要的機(jī)器人"的征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，描述你最想要的機(jī)器人：
1．機(jī)器人的外觀；
2．機(jī)器人的功能；
3．你想要這種機(jī)器人的原因．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100-120；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英語俱樂部最近正在舉辦主題為"你最想要的機(jī)器人"的征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，描述你最想要的機(jī)器人，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：機(jī)器人的外觀；機(jī)器人的功能；你想要這種機(jī)器人的原因．
 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Nowadays當(dāng)今，現(xiàn)在； First首先；Therefore因此；as well as也，和；be busy doing忙于做某事；
 First，the robot I want should have a lovely appearance，which will make me happy to see it．（高分句型一）
Therefore，besides accompanying me when I am walking or playing，it could also help my mother do some housework．（高分句型二）
My mother is always busy taking care of us，as well as working in a company．（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays，there are more and more robots in the world．So，what is the robot I want most？Let me tell you．
      First，the robot I want should have a lovely appearance，which will make me happy to see it．（高分句型一） I like dogs very much，so a robot dog would be best．Though it would look like a dog，it could also stand，like people．Therefore，besides accompanying me when I am walking or playing，it could also help my mother do some housework．（高分句型二）My mother is always busy taking care of us，as well as working in a company．（高分句型三）I really want to help her，but I always have my own work to do．She wouldn't be so tired if she had my robot as a helper．
      I really hope that such a robot will be available soon．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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