假如你是某英文報(bào)刊的通訊員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格以 “A Big Forest Fire” 為題,寫一篇簡(jiǎn)單報(bào)道,并發(fā)表你的看法。

時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)

10月底,美國(guó)西北部

火災(zāi)原因

一青年工人在林中吸煙

持續(xù)時(shí)間

3個(gè)多星期

參加救火人員

數(shù)千名消防隊(duì)員及當(dāng)?shù)卮迕?/p>

傷亡人數(shù)

9人死亡,約80人受傷

經(jīng)濟(jì)損失

至少2000萬美元

影響

震驚全國(guó)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

詞數(shù):120詞左右

參考詞匯:經(jīng)濟(jì)損失 economic losses; 消防隊(duì)員 firefighter

 

 

 

 

One possible version:

A Big Forest Fire

A terrible fire broke out at the end of October in a forest in the southwest of America. The fire, which resulted from the smoking of a careless young man, lasted three weeks and caused economic losses of about 20 million dollars. What’s worse, nine persons lost their lives in the fire and about 80 were seriously injured as a result of the fire. Thousands of firefighters and local villagers fought together and they finally managed to put out the great fire. The fire astonished the whole nation.

In my personal opinion, fire is very important in our life but sometimes it can be very dangerous, so we’d better be careful with it.

【解析】

試題分析:根據(jù)提示判斷本文屬于材料作文。通過提示語可知寫作內(nèi)容為報(bào)道一則消息并表明自己的看法。所以在行文構(gòu)思時(shí)可采取兩段式。第一段描述事情的發(fā)生及影響,注意不要遺漏表格里的信息。在描述事件的時(shí)候,可以按照時(shí)間順序講述,也可以采用別的方法。同時(shí)注意上下文的銜接,靈活使用過渡詞以及各種句型,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,搭配適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞使文章銜接自然?傻诙斡脙傻饺湓挵l(fā)表關(guān)于這個(gè)事件的個(gè)人看法。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本篇范文開篇點(diǎn)題,第一句A terrible fire broke out at the end of October in a forest in the southwest of America.直接介紹大火發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),關(guān)于事情的描述非常符合報(bào)道的要求。在對(duì)于森林起火的描述中長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,體現(xiàn)了非限制性定語從句which resulted from the smoking of a careless young man。除此之外,復(fù)合句的使用頻率非常高,如nine persons lost their lives in the fire and about 80 were seriously injured as a result of the fire. Thousands of firefighters and local villagers fought together and they finally managed to put out the great fire.這在一定程度上增加了報(bào)道的緊湊型,同時(shí)減少了過渡詞的使用。第二段以In my personal opinion引導(dǎo)出作者的態(tài)度觀點(diǎn),語言簡(jiǎn)潔明了。文中使用的詞匯難度得當(dāng),固定搭配使用靈活,都為文章增色不少。

 

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