文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及—個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加—個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不記分。
I am deep impressed by the great changes that have taken the place in the school over the past three years. On May 12, 2008, a sever earthquake destroyed almost nothing in the school, left badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, included laboratory buildings and a library. There was also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily or working hard. It is really amazing if the once-ruined place has now turned into a beautiful school, full of life. Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there will be no new school today.


【小題1】 deep改成deeply
【小題2】去掉the
【小題3】nothing 改成everything
【小題4】left改成 leaving
【小題5】taking后面加 on
【小題6】included改成 including
【小題7】was改成 is
【小題8】or改成 and
【小題9】if改成 that
【小題10】will改成 would

解析試題分析：文章介紹了地震三年后，在整個(gè)社會(huì)的幫忙下，學(xué)校發(fā)生的巨大的變化。
【小題1】我對(duì)過去三年學(xué)校發(fā)生的巨大的變化深深的打動(dòng)了。修飾impessed用副詞：deep改成deeply
【小題2】詞組：發(fā)生“take place”去掉the
【小題3】2008年的5月12號(hào)，一場(chǎng)大地震毀了我們學(xué)校的一切，nothing 改成everything
【小題4】留下嚴(yán)重受損的房子。left改成 leaving是現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)
【小題5】現(xiàn)在它呈現(xiàn)出了新的面貌。Take on呈現(xiàn)
【小題6】高樓已經(jīng)被建成，包括圖書館和實(shí)驗(yàn)樓，包含： including，included放在名詞后面。
【小題7】也有個(gè)新建的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)球場(chǎng)。因?yàn)檎f的是現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：was改成 is
【小題8】在新的環(huán)境中老師和同學(xué)過的很幸福，工作學(xué)習(xí)很努力。這是并列關(guān)系：or改成 and
【小題9】曾經(jīng)被毀了的地方變成了一個(gè)美麗的學(xué)校真是 讓人驚嘆。It是形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)的是真正的主語(yǔ)從句
【小題10】沒有整個(gè)社會(huì)的幫忙，也沒有我們現(xiàn)在新的學(xué)校。這是隱含的虛擬語(yǔ)氣；will改成 would
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