目前環(huán)境保護已成為人們極為關心的問題。 假設你受邀參加一次國際中學生環(huán)境保護論壇征稿活動，請按根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇應征短文： 1.簡述目前環(huán)境狀況； 2.環(huán)境污染產(chǎn)生的原因及對生活的影響； 3.提出兩個解決辦法。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 120 左右；

可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱。

The environment has become a matter of great concern to the general public.

 

 

 

One possible version：

The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Haze weather is a typical example that is affecting our life. Besides, forest destruction results in decrease of planting land. Now around China, most of the cities are enveloped by heavy haze which is the killer of our respiration.

Serious as the problem seems, we can come up with some measures to deal with it. First of all, the authorities should adopt the policy of "sustainable development", and the environmental protection should be strictly put into effect.

What’s more, every citizen should realize the seriousness of the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment. In addition, planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)提示可知本文屬于話題作文。仔細讀題可知這篇文章的主題為“環(huán)境保護”，并且出題者對文章內(nèi)容也有要求。所以在寫這篇文章的時候難度不是很大，只需要分別完成三個關于寫作內(nèi)容的要求，文章的框架就出來了。然后再適當添加語句，是文章充實起來，并且上下文銜接自然。在描述目前環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀的時候用一到兩句話就足夠了。在描述其產(chǎn)生的原因和影響時注意句子之間的過渡及連接詞如 Besides等的使用。文章的重心在于就環(huán)境保護提出兩個解決辦法，在這一部分尤其要注意句子之間的銜接和層次。最后在選詞造句過程中注意長短句結(jié)合以及高級詞匯的使用。

【亮點說明】

本片范文層次分明，結(jié)合出題者的要求并很好地掌握了重心。第一段開篇就用一句話The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction.簡要描述目前的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀。然后舉出時下的環(huán)境熱點如霧霾Haze weather 和森林植被問題forest destruction 等，巧妙的是第一段最后Now around China, most of the cities are enveloped by heavy haze which is the killer of our respiration. 以環(huán)境問題聯(lián)系實際生活，很好地總結(jié)了第一段的內(nèi)容。第二段和第三段集中就前文提到的環(huán)境問題給出一些解決方法。在這兩段中，過渡詞的使用如 First of all，What’s more和In addition等，使得文章上下銜接自然，閱卷老師一目了然。其次，定語從句如most of the cities are enveloped by heavy haze which is the killer of our respiration. 倒裝句Serious as the problem seems等句型的使用也為文章增色不少。

 

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