Question

【題目】每個(gè)人對(duì)待幸福的態(tài)度和感覺(jué)都不一樣，請(qǐng)你就What Is Happiness? 這一話(huà)題談?wù)勀銓?duì)幸福的看法。

主要內(nèi)容如下：

1.不同的人對(duì)幸福有不同的看法(從物質(zhì)、精神等方面分析)；

2.我對(duì)幸福的看法。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于120；

2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

Answer 1

【答案】

Happiness means different things to different people. Some people believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. Some other people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness. In this way, they have not only money but also power, which can’t be bought by money.

However, there are still some people who have quite opposite opinions. They value their belief, or their intelligence, or their health, which they think can make them happy.

For me, happiness is closely tied to my studies, my work and my family. When I make great progress in studies, when I make contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, I will be happy. Although the definition of happiness depends on each individual, my “wealth” of happiness is in my studies, my work and my family.

【解析】

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章第一段第二句是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句以及which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)雜句。Some people believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. 有一些人認(rèn)為如果他們很富有，他們就可以做任何他們想做的事情，這就叫幸福。第三句是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，表達(dá)出另一部分人的觀點(diǎn)：Some other people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness.另一些人認(rèn)為在政府位居高官是幸福。第四句是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 In this way, they have not only money but also power, which can’t be bought by money. 這樣，他們既有權(quán)又有錢(qián)，這是不可能用錢(qián)買(mǎi)到的。Which修飾的是整個(gè)主句。文章第二段分別為一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。第二段第一句是who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句However, there are still some people who have quite opposite opinions. 然而，還是有一些人有著完全相反的觀點(diǎn)。Who的先行詞是people。第二句是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句They value their belief, or their intelligence, or their health, which they think can make them happy.他們珍視自己的信仰、智力或者健康，這些讓他們認(rèn)為能夠使他們快樂(lè)的東西。第三段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二句是一個(gè)排比式的、when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When I make great progress in studies, when I make contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, I will be happy. 當(dāng)我在學(xué)習(xí)上取得進(jìn)步的時(shí)候，當(dāng)我通過(guò)工作對(duì)社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)的時(shí)候，當(dāng)我的家人都過(guò)得很和諧，分享快樂(lè)和苦難的時(shí)候，我會(huì)很高興。最后一個(gè)句子是although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句Although the definition of happiness depends on each individual, my “wealth” of happiness is in my studies, my work and my family.盡管幸福的定義取決于個(gè)人，我幸福的財(cái)產(chǎn)在于我的學(xué)習(xí)、我的工作以及我的家人。