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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華。你校英語(yǔ)演講協(xié)會(huì)將選舉新一屆主席，你欲參選。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇演講稿，要點(diǎn)包括：1.你的個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；

2.未來(lái)活動(dòng)設(shè)想；

3.希望當(dāng)選。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association._________________________________________________________________

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association.

Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires,I feel I am qualified First of all.I'm fluent in oral English and have worked as a part-time travel guide for foreigners.Secondly,I am outgoing,warm-hearted and really good at communicating with strangers. Moreover,I like giving speeches publicly I think it's a good way to build one's confidence.

If I am elected.I will organize different kinds of activities such as English Culture Festival and English Coffee Time,where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.

Thank you.

【解析】試題分析：

本次作文要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇演講稿來(lái)競(jìng)選新一屆主席。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：

1.競(jìng)選職位：英語(yǔ)演講協(xié)會(huì)將選舉新一屆主席。

2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)：（1）英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)流利而且曾兼職過(guò)外國(guó)人的導(dǎo)游（2）性格開(kāi)朗、熱心，善于與陌生人打交道。（3））更為重要的是喜歡在公眾場(chǎng)合演講。3.中選后的決心及設(shè)想。組織各種活動(dòng)讓學(xué)生們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)練習(xí)英語(yǔ)和提高英語(yǔ)水平，盡力成為一屆好的主席。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇要點(diǎn)齊全，緊扣主題，行文連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式多變化，使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力，整個(gè)文章一氣呵成。

寫作中使用多個(gè)復(fù)雜句子。例如：

運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句If I am elected.　I will organize different kinds of activities和I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.狀語(yǔ)從句。

運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English。

使用了賓語(yǔ)從句Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires 。

運(yùn)用了表示順序的連接詞，如first of all, secondly,　moreover.

使用變化多樣的句式。如使用了非謂語(yǔ)Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires, I feel I am qualified。