Question

3．文中共有10處錯誤，涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在此處加一個漏字符號 （∧），并在其下面寫出修改的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （\） 劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分．
I heard a story about Joan，who was in the army during World WarⅡ．One evening she had met an officer named David，who told herself that he would leave for the front．He added，"I'd be very happier if we could write to each other．"Joan agreed，and   they  wrote  for several  month．T hen his letters stopped．Later，Joan received the letter from another officer，telling her that David had been wounded but was in an army hospital．Joan decided  go to  the hospital to see David immediately．She came to the hospital，only to be told that only relatives were allowing to visit the patients here．She then said to a nurse，"I'm David's sister．"Feeling surprising，the nurse said，"I'm his mother．"

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了二戰(zhàn)中兩位戰(zhàn)士Joan和David的故事．一天David告訴Joan他要去前線了，他們約定要相互通信，可是幾個月后David的信中斷了，Joan從另外一位戰(zhàn)士那里得知David受傷了，現(xiàn)在住在軍隊的醫(yī)院，Joan決定去醫(yī)院看他，可是醫(yī)院規(guī)定只有親屬才可以探望病人，Joan于是對護士說："我是他姐姐"，護士吃驚地說："我是他媽媽"．

解答 I heard a story about Joan，who was in the army during World WarⅡ．One evening she had met an officer named David，who told herself that he would leave for the front．He added，"I'd be very happier if we could write to each other．"Joan agreed，and they wrote for several month．T hen his letters stopped．Later，Joan received the letter from another officer，telling her that David had been wounded but was in an army hospital．Joan decided∧go to the hospital to see David immediately．She came to the hospital，only to be told that only relatives were allowing to visit the patients here．She then said to a nurse，"I'm David's sister．"Feeling surprising，the nurse said，"I'm his mother．"
詳解：
1．去掉had；考查動詞的時態(tài)，根據(jù)句子的時間狀語One evening 可判斷句子應該用一般過去時，故去掉had．
2．herself改為her；考查人稱代詞，句意為"David告訴她…"，故用人稱代詞her．
3．happier改為happy；考查形容詞，這里句意為"我會感到很高興…"，沒有比較的意思，故用直接形容詞作be的表語．
4．month改為months；考查名詞的單復數(shù)，month是可數(shù)名詞，前面有several（幾個）修飾，要用復數(shù)形式．
5．the改為a；考查冠詞，此處用不定冠詞a表示泛指．
6．but改為and；考查連詞，分析句意為"David受傷了，住在軍隊的醫(yī)院"，所以此處用and表示并列．
7．decided后加to；考查固定搭配，decide to do 是固定搭配，意為"決定做某事"．
8．a(chǎn)llowing改為allowed；考查動詞的語態(tài)，分析句意應為"只有親屬才被允許看望那里的病人"，所以要把allowing改為allowed，構成被動語態(tài)．
9．here改為there；考查地點副詞，分析句意應為"只有親屬才被允許看望那里的病人"，所以應該用there，表明"那里"．
10．surprising改為surprised；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞作形容詞修飾人，句中指的是the nurse，故用過去分詞作形容詞．

點評 整體把握短文大意，弄清短文的基本時態(tài)，分析句子之間的結構關系，結合上下文語境運用詞匯，語法等基礎知識找出文中的錯誤并加以修改．