Question

假如你是李華，Tracy 即將結(jié)束你們學(xué)校作為交換生的學(xué)習(xí)生活并返回英國(guó)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g送詞。
1、贊揚(yáng)她的善良友好；
2、懷念與她相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光；
3、感謝她對(duì)大家英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；
4、希望她有機(jī)會(huì)再來(lái)中國(guó)。
注意：1、詞數(shù)：120-150；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Dear teachers and friends,
I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England. Tracy is a very kind and friendly girl and I feel happy to be her friend. She gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. Whenever we have trouble learning English, she doesn’t hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since she came to our class. We owe a lot of thanks to Tracy.
True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.
That’s all. Thank you.

解析試題分析：歡送辭是當(dāng)客人離開(kāi)時(shí)，在告別宴會(huì)或其他特定場(chǎng)合主人對(duì)客人表示惜別之情和表達(dá)祝愿時(shí)所使用的一種專(zhuān)用文書(shū)。
1. 歡送詞分為3個(gè)部分；稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ)，正文，結(jié)束語(yǔ)。
2. 正文是致辭的主體，歡送辭要表達(dá)對(duì)客人在和大家相處這段時(shí)間的難忘之情，回顧彼此交往的過(guò)程或經(jīng)歷，同時(shí)對(duì)逗留期間所見(jiàn)所聞發(fā)表感想，并評(píng)價(jià)對(duì)方取得的成績(jī)和建立的友誼及貢獻(xiàn)。在正文結(jié)束時(shí)表達(dá)對(duì)對(duì)方的良好祝福和熱切希望。
3. 從語(yǔ)言特征上看，英語(yǔ)致辭的用詞要熱烈，誠(chéng)懇，語(yǔ)句要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，要比較口語(yǔ)化，不要太過(guò)咬文嚼字。
4. 常用客套話； We wish…a pleasant time…. May you have a pleasant time…，Wish you a good trip/journey back home! We are looking forward to seeing you again
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Tracy is a very kind and friendly girl and I feel happy to be her friend.這是并列句， She gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her.這句話用了get along with sb“和某人相處”和have a wonderful time玩得愉快， Whenever we have trouble learning English, she doesn’t hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since she came to our class. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和have trouble in doing“做…有困難”，We owe a lot of thanks to Tracy.這句話用了詞組：owe thanks to sb“向某人道謝”， I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句。
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