Question

6．假定你是劉瑩，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）．請(qǐng)給外教Trump寫(xiě)封郵件，邀他一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：
1．出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；
2．活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Trump，
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival．It is the day for the elderly in our culture．We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there．We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)）We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon．（返回時(shí)間）If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】（出發(fā)時(shí)間）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Liu Ying．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)給外教露西寫(xiě)一封郵件，邀她一同前往敬老院陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)，主要要點(diǎn)：1．出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間； 2．活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等．屬提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：invite you to do （邀請(qǐng)某人做…），make dumplings （包餃子），spend time （in）doing （花費(fèi)時(shí)間…做），make sb happy （使某人高興），be able to do（能做某事），wait for sb（等候某人），at the school gate（在校門(mén)口），look forward to doing （期望做…）．
We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】
If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Trump，
      I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival．It is the day for the elderly in our culture．We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there．We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)）We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon．（返回時(shí)間）If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning．【高分句型】（出發(fā)時(shí)間） 
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Liu Ying

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