Question

6．假設(shè)你是某校學(xué)生李華，針對目前中學(xué)生整體書寫水平下降的現(xiàn)象，請以Handwriting Is Important為題向你校校報英語欄目投稿．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．簡述現(xiàn)象及其原因；
2．談?wù)勌岣邥鴮懩芰Φ闹匾�性�?br />3．提出提高書寫水平的辦法，如：參加書法班、堅持寫日記…
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120-150；
2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：書法班calligraphy class．

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱類的書信作文，要求針對目前中學(xué)生整體書寫水平下降的現(xiàn)象發(fā)表個人看法．要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述．審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第三人稱，兼顧第二人稱，表達(dá)個人觀點(diǎn)時可以使用第一人稱．
重要短語：
be regarded as被視為…；apply for申請；be supposed to do應(yīng)該做；For one thing，…．For another，…一方面…，另一方面…；All in all總而言之，be of great significance非常有意義．
高分句型：
1．With computers widely used in many fields，more and more people now type everything on the computer
instead of writing on paper，which has caused the level of students'handwriting skills to drop sharply．這句中含有一個介詞with的符合結(jié)構(gòu)，在句中做原因狀語；后面含有一個which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．
2．when you apply for a job and the manager asks you to fill a form，your handwriting is the first impression given to the manager．本句中含有一個when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；impression后面含有一個過去分詞短語作后置定語．
3．All in all，practicing handwriting can help students improve both their bodies and minds，which is of great significance to their growth．本句中的主語為動名詞短語practicing handwriting，后面是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．

解答 With computers widely used in many fields，more and more people now type everything on the computer instead of writing on paper，which has caused the level of students'handwriting skills to drop sharply．（高分句型）（指出現(xiàn)象原因）
      Handwriting is regarded as a basic skill in society．It is one of the standards that measure a person's quality．For example，when you apply for a job and the manager asks you to fill a form，your handwriting is the first impression given to the manager．（高分句型）Perhaps you may fail to get the job just because of your poor handwriting．Therefore，it is necessary to better your handwriting．（分析重要性）
So in my opinion，we are supposed to hold handwriting contests，attend calligraphy class and keep on writing diary and so on．For one thing，it can improve students'handwriting skills and develop their interest in the art of calligraphy．For another，it can make students love Chinese characters．（提高方法）
       All in all，practicing handwriting can help students improve both their bodies and minds，which is of great significance to their growth．（高分句型）（指明意義）

點(diǎn)評 書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略．同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采．