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【題目】書面表達

在中學生中，互贈生日禮物成為一種時尚，有的甚至還去飯店搞生日聚會。對此同學們有不同的看法。假設你是李華，請你根據(jù)下表提示，給某英語報社編輯寫一封信，并談談自己的觀點。

贊成	為同學們提供交際機會；利于增進同學之間的友誼；學習之余可以放松心情。
反對	容易造成對時間和金錢的浪費；導致攀比；對青少年學習和成長造成不利影響。
你的觀點	......

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右（信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）

2. 短文須包括表中的全部內容，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：攀比：keep up with the Joneses

Dear Editor,

I'm a middle school student named Li Hua. Recently, we often have to buy presents for our

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I'm a middle school student named Li Hua. Recently, we often have to buy presents for our classmates' birthdays, and sometimes, we are their birthday parties in expensive hotels, which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.

About this there are two different views. Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship, and besides, we can relax after hard work at school. However, some other students think it's a waste of money and time and can lead us to getting into the bad habit of trying to keep up with the Joneses, which has a bad effect on our growth and studies.

As far as I'm concerned, it's not easy for our parents to make money and keep us at school for education. So there is no need for us to do like that. We must treasure our parents' labor and put our hearts into our studies.

What do you think about it? I'm expecting your reply.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語invite to邀請；provides with提供；communicate with交流；besides除此之外；However然而；As far as I'm concerned就我而言；a waste of 浪費；heir birthday parties in expensive hotels, which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays中是which引導引導的定語從句。