【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Flying a kite is one of the Chinese traditional activity but I didn't experience it until last weekend. It was beautiful Sunday. My little brother begged me to fly a kite with him. We bought a kite shaping like an eagle and went to the Times Square, which many people were flying their kites happily. Saw the lively scene,we couldn't wait to join them. After some attempts, therefore, I found flying a kite wasn't as easily as imagined. About half an hour later, the kite flies into the sky slowly. My brother watched to it jumping and cheering. I was pride that I had made it.

【答案】1. activity activities

2. beautiful前加a

3. shaping shaped

4. which where

5. Saw Seeing

6. therefore however

7. easily easy

8. flies flew

9. 去掉to

10. pride proud

【解析】

本文為記敘文。文章講述了在一個周末,作者帶著弟弟放風(fēng)箏的經(jīng)歷。

第一處:考查固定用法。one of + 可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù),此處應(yīng)用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式,故將activity改為activities。

第二處:考查不定冠詞。句意:這是一個美麗的星期天。表示季節(jié)、月份、日期、三餐的名詞或表示世界上獨一無二事物的名詞前,如有形容詞修飾時,常在其前加不定冠詞表示泛指。beautiful的首字母發(fā)音是輔音,用不定冠詞a。

故在beautiful前加a。

第三處:考查過去分詞作定語。分析句子成分可知,此處應(yīng)用過去分詞形式shaped(有…形狀的),與其前的名詞a kite之間為被動關(guān)系,a kite shaped like an eagle意為“形狀像鷹的風(fēng)箏”,故將shaping改為shaped。

第四處:考查定語從句關(guān)系副詞。句意:我們買了一只鷹形的風(fēng)箏,去了時代廣場,很多人都在那里開心地放風(fēng)箏。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處為定語從句,修飾先行詞the Times Square,該先行詞在定語從句中作地點狀語,應(yīng)用where引導(dǎo),故將which改為where。

第五處:考查現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,動詞see與主句之間為主動關(guān)系,且在此處作時間狀語,應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式,故將Saw改為Seeing。

第六處:考查副詞。句意:經(jīng)過幾次嘗試,我發(fā)現(xiàn)放風(fēng)箏并不像想象的那么容易。根據(jù)句意可知,然而,幾次嘗試之后,作者發(fā)現(xiàn)放風(fēng)箏不容易,所以此處應(yīng)該為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故將therefore改為however。

第七處:考查形容詞用法。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處為表語,應(yīng)用形容詞,故將easily改為easy。

第八處:考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文可知,本文講述過去的事件經(jīng)歷,應(yīng)用一般過去時,故將flies改為flew。

第九處:考查動詞。該句中watch為及物動詞,后應(yīng)直接接賓語,所以to多余,故去掉to。

第十處:考查形容詞。句意:我很自豪我做到了。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,本句為主系表結(jié)構(gòu),此處應(yīng)用形容詞形式作表語,故將pride改為proud。

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