Question

9．生活中處處充滿(mǎn)陽(yáng)光，每個(gè)人都會(huì)得到同學(xué)的幫助、朋友的支持、老師的關(guān)心和親人的愛(ài)護(hù)，讓你感受到生活中的陽(yáng)光和幸福．請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一件你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的事，說(shuō)明生活是美好的．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine．
有人說(shuō)，生活是快樂(lè)的，但是其他人覺(jué)得生活是不快樂(lè)的．在我看來(lái)，生命是美麗而充滿(mǎn)陽(yáng)光．
高分句型二：
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever．
也許有時(shí)我們會(huì)感到不幸，但我們應(yīng)該相信生活是美好的．幫助和愛(ài)永遠(yuǎn)在我們身邊．

解答 Sunshine in My Life
Everyone has different ideas about life．Some say life is happy，but others feel life is unhappy．In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of sunshine（高分句型一）．
Several weeks ago，one of my classmates Sun was badly ill．He had to be in hospital for a long time．But his family was too poor to afford it．What could we do？We decided to raise money for him．Everyone in our class took out our pocket money．Then，we went to the street on Sunday to collect money from others．When we sent all the money to him，he and his parents were deeply moved．
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe life is beautiful．Help and love will be around us forever（高分句型二）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．