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5．住房條件寬敞、整潔、環(huán)境優(yōu)美語言優(yōu)勢擅長英語，父母是英語老師，沒有交流困難接待經(jīng)驗兩個月前接待過 3 名英國學生參觀游覽母親可駕車陪同參觀附近的名勝其它（內容由考生自己添加）
假如你是李華，是重慶市某中學學生．最近你校在為一批來自澳大利亞的學生征尋住宿家 庭，你有意申請．請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語給校長寫封信，說明你申請的理由．
注意：1．文章必須包括所有要點，而且結構完整、行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù) 100 字左右．信的開頭與結尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Austrilian students．
（介紹住房條件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（語言優(yōu)勢）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待經(jīng)驗）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
（高分句型二） I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．

Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，是重慶市某中學學生．最近你校在為一批來自澳大利亞的學生征尋住宿家 庭，你有意申請．請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語給校長寫封信，說明你申請的理由，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：住房條件寬敞、整潔、環(huán)境優(yōu)美語言優(yōu)勢擅長英語，父母是英語老師，沒有交流困難接待經(jīng)驗兩個月前接待過； 3名英國學生參觀游覽母親可駕車陪同參觀附近的名勝其它  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
（高分句型一）We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city． 
該句型使用which引導的一個非限制性定語從句，which指先行詞a large and clean house； 
（高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them． 
該句使用了  I would greatly appreciate it if…如果…我會很感激的…
高級詞匯：lie in坐落于；have any difficulty in 做某事有困難；places of interest 名勝古跡； appreciate 感激；

解答 Dear sir，
       I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Austrilian students． 
    （介紹住房條件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（語言優(yōu)勢）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待經(jīng)驗）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．  （高分句型二） 
        I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them． 
        Looking forward to your reply． 
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．