Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限1詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】加to

【2】去掉an

【3】them→it

【4】eats →ate

【5】other →others

【6】is →was

【7】making→ made

【8】angrily→ angry

【9】loudly →loud

【10】difference →different

【解析】

試題分析:本文主要講了我的表哥Tom的轉(zhuǎn)變過(guò)程。小時(shí)候他是一個(gè)自私自利的人，偷偷把巧克力藏起來(lái)自己吃，不愿意幫助他人，不在乎他人感受。但是現(xiàn)在他變得不同了，幫助奶奶做家務(wù)、媽媽做飯。

【1】加to 考查want用法。want to do sth,想做某事。He didn't want to share things with other people.他不喜歡和其他的人分享，故加上to。

【2】去掉an 考查固定搭配。For example舉例子，不用冠詞，故去掉an。

【3】them→it 考查代詞。when he bought a chocolate cake，he put it in a secret place.他買(mǎi)了巧克力蛋糕后，會(huì)把它放在秘密的地方。此處it代指前面a chocolate cake，是單數(shù)名詞，不用them，改為it。

【4】eats →ate 考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)。講述我的表哥過(guò)去的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故改為ate。

【5】other →others 考查代名詞。He never helped others.他從不幫助他人。Others指的是除他以外的所有人，是泛指概念，故改為others。

【6】is →was 考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)。He said he was busy他說(shuō)他很忙。敘述的是白哦個(gè)過(guò)去的事情，前面用的是said，故改為was。

【7】making→ made 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。That is，a game of tennis made him very busy.換言之，網(wǎng)球使他非常的忙碌。主語(yǔ)是a game of tennis，時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故改為made。

【8】angrily→ angry 考查形容詞。made people angry使某人很生氣，用形容詞，故改為angry。

【9】loudly →loud 考查形容詞。on a cold night he played strong and loudly music在晚上他把音樂(lè)聲音放的很大。music是名詞，形容詞修飾名詞，故改為loud。

【10】difference →different 考查形容詞。But he is difference now.但是他現(xiàn)在大不一樣了，be different不一樣，故改為different。