Question

【題目】每個人都有失敗的經歷。請以此為主題寫一篇100左右的文章。要求:

1.回憶自己的一次失敗。

2.反思失敗的教訓。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

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Answer 1

【答案】 A failure in my youth, a lesson a whole life, that is what I experienced in this fiercely hot summer!

Regarded as the most intelligent child in my family, I, from the very beginning of my education, always treated examinations as pieces of cakes. Frankly, the journey of my schooling was so smooth that I became pretty overconfident and as a punishment, I lost the most important one, that is, NMET.

It is a painful lesson, but a priceless one. Without stormy seas he could not make himself a true man. With this faith I decided to set out freshly once again, for my dream and future!

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類作文。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，每個人都有失敗的經歷。請以此為主題寫一篇100左右的文章。要求:1.回憶自己的一次失敗。2.反思失敗的教訓。第二，人稱以第一人稱為主。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，總述自己的失敗經歷。第二段，回憶自己的一次失敗。第三段，反思失敗的教訓。

第三步：確定關鍵詞匯和短語: priceless， failure，experienced，painful lesson， treated examinations as pieces of cakes，overconfident，set out，so...that，decide to do sth。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子:what 引導的表語從句A failure in my youth, a lesson a whole life, that is what I experienced in this fiercely hot summer! 過去分詞作狀語Regarded as the most intelligent child in my family, I, from the very beginning of my education, always treated examinations as pieces of cakes.so...that 引導的結果狀語從句 Frankly, the journey of my schooling was so smooth that I became pretty overconfident and as a punishment, I lost the most important one, that is, NMET。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接: Frankly，Besides, Finally。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。