Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 (＼) 劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.

Answer 1

1.student改為students;

2.similar改為different;

3.listen改為listening;

4.As result之間添加a

5.lately改為late;

6.which改為that;

7.more改為less;

8.for her go to 加to;

9.effective改為effectively;

10.prefer to 去掉to

【解析】

1.小題1】文中“Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student，”two后的名詞要復(fù)數(shù)，故student改為students。

2.小題2】文中“They both work hard but they have similar learning methods.”根據(jù)but可知，前后關(guān)系為轉(zhuǎn)折，故similar改為different。

3.小題3】instead of 后若接動(dòng)詞，需用動(dòng)詞的-ing 形式，故listen改為listening。

4.小題4】As a result 固定搭配，譯為：結(jié)果是…，故As result之間添加a。

5.小題5】lately意思是：近來(lái)，不久前；late作副詞時(shí)譯為：晚，遲。故lately改為late。

6.小題6】當(dāng)先行詞為不定代詞如nothing,everything.anything等時(shí)，引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系代詞只能選擇that.不能用which.故which改為that。

7.小題7】文中“Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early.”她很早上床睡覺，因此可推出她花很少的時(shí)間來(lái)寫作業(yè)，故 more改為less。

8.小題8】it is possible for sb to do sth.固定搭配，故 for her go to 加to。

9.小題9】文中“Wang Ying learns more effective in class.”王明在課上學(xué)習(xí)效率很高，副詞修飾形容詞，故effective改為effectively。

10.小題10】prefer后接名詞或動(dòng)名詞，故prefer to 去掉to。

考點(diǎn)：考查記敘性短文。