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14．眾所周知，一個人的成長過程是較為復(fù)雜的，其個性的形成和發(fā)展受諸多因素的影響，比如：家庭、學(xué)校、社會、朋友、書籍、名人等．假如《二十一世紀(jì)英文報》向你約稿，了解至今哪些因素對你的成長影響最大．請你以Tracking My Growth為題，按以下要求寫篇英語短文：
1．選擇并陳述對你的成長起著很大影響的家庭、學(xué)校、社會、朋友、書籍、名人等諸多因素中的兩個或三個；
2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛桑?br />注意：詞數(shù)120 左右，文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．
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Answer 1

分析 本文主題為：Tracking My Growth（追尋我的成長足跡）
寫作要點為：1．選擇并陳述對你的成長起著很大影響的家庭、學(xué)校、社會、朋友、書籍、名人等諸多因素中的兩個或三個；
2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛桑?/p>

解答 One possible version：
Tracking My Growth
    The process of growing up is complex for every person，for there are many influential factors in a person's growth as well as the development of his personality．As for me，what has affected me most in my both growth and personality are family and friends，the two equally important factors．
After one is born，the first surroundings is the family in which he will grow up．Family plays a significant role in shaping children's character because it's children's most direct source of knowledge and experiences．Those who are brought up in good families tend to possess many pleasant characters and vice versa．
On the other hand，friends in some ways influence him more rapidly than families do．Friends have many different opinions and personalities．Discussing with them builds up his personality．Frank ly speaking，I get lots of valuable things from my friends．
Family offers me warmth and care．Friends give me strength and horizons．Therefore，both of them are most influential in my growth

點評 考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．