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10．假定你是李華，有一個好朋友叫王剛，進(jìn)入高三后，他的學(xué)習(xí)壓力越來越大，常常熬夜，而白天卻打不起精神來聽課，學(xué)習(xí)成績每況愈下，為此他很痛苦，寫信求助于你．你寫一封信給他，提出一些自我調(diào)整的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Wang Gang，
Dear WangGang，
I'm sorry to hear that you have great trouble in your study in Senior Three．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．Many of you of course feel sleepy during the daytime，thus your grades fall．I'm sure you know that it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．
Don't worry too much．It's no use worrying all the time．You can adjust yourself by listening to some music in your spare time during the weekend．Never stay up again because it reduces the effect of listening to the teacher at daytime．In the face of pressure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice if necessary．Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by keeping high spirits persistently can we make progress step by step till success．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放類作文，我們需要用英語把給出的要點準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)出來．動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．寫作時使用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時．內(nèi)容要點要針對王剛的困惑提出具體的有指導(dǎo)性的建議．

重要短語：have great trouble in（在…有麻煩），feel nervous（感到緊張），end up with sth（以某事而結(jié)束），feel sleepy（犯困），leave behind（落后），in the face of（面臨），calm down（鎮(zhèn)靜想，鎮(zhèn)定），reflect sth（反思某事），make changes（作變化），turn to sb for advice（向某人尋求建議），keep high spirits（保持高昂的士氣），make progress（取得進(jìn)步），step by step（一步一步的），be of some help to sb（對某人有幫助）．
【高分句型一】
1．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the only one"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在定語從句中做主語．
【高分句型二】
2．I'm sure you know①that ②it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．
  ①此處是由"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，主句為"I'm sure you know"．
 ②此處是由形式主語"it"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+to do sth"
【高分句型三】
3．①what we need to do is②to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice．
①此處是由疑問代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"what"在從句中作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
②此處是由三個不定式"to do"作表語，"and"后面的是省略了"to"的動詞不定式（表示并列關(guān)系的兩個或多個不定式可以省略"to"）．
【高分句型四】
4．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
 此處是由省略了"that"的賓語從句，主句為"I firmly hope"．

解答 Dear Wang Gang，
I'm sorry to hear that you have great trouble in your study in Senior Three．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．【高分句型一】Many of you of course feel sleepy during the daytime，thus your grades fall．I'm sure you know that it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．【高分句型二】（消極行為可能帶來的不良后果）
 Don't worry too much．It's no use worrying all the time．You can adjust yourself by listening to some music in your spare time during the weekend．Never stay up again because it reduces the effect of listening to the teacher at daytime．In the face of pressure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice if necessary．【高分句型三】Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by keeping high spirits persistently can we make progress step by step till success．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．【高分句型四】（結(jié)合自身實際提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法）

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