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3．學(xué)生會(huì)正在評(píng)選新一屆學(xué)生會(huì)主席，假設(shè)你是該校的學(xué)生李青，有意參加競(jìng)選．寫(xiě)一份自薦材料，材料必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人信息及你所具備的競(jìng)選條件（能力、性格、愛(ài)好等）．
如果當(dāng)選，請(qǐng)你用具體事例闡述你將會(huì)為本校學(xué)生做些什么？
注意：自薦材料中不得使用你所在學(xué)校和你的真實(shí)名字．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一份自薦材料，參加學(xué)校新一屆學(xué)生會(huì)主席的競(jìng)選．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人信息和具備的競(jìng)選條件； 2．具體闡述將會(huì)為本校學(xué)生做些什么．
重要短語(yǔ)：learn sth about…（了解關(guān)于某事），the extracurricular reading（課外閱讀），frankly speaking （ 坦誠(chéng)地說(shuō)），first of all （首先），be burdened with（負(fù)重?fù)?dān)…），form a habit of（形成做某事的習(xí)慣），take up （從事），limit sth （現(xiàn)在某事…），the amount of…（…的總量，總數(shù)），enjoy reading （享受閱讀）．
【高分句型】
1．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．
此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"I've been in the Student Union for two years"，主句的主語(yǔ)為"I"，與所給動(dòng)詞"serve"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
2．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．
此處是由"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
3．If given this position，I will do my utmost．
此處是條件狀語(yǔ)從句中的省略，可以理解為"If I am given this position"，主句為"I will do my utmost"．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      Iam a student named Li Qing from Grade 3 Class 1，writing this letter to campaign for the president of theStudent Union．【高分句型】（開(kāi)頭-引出話(huà)題）
      From my point of view，I am the right oneyou want．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．【高分句型】Moreover，I amoutgoing and capable of having effective talks with others．When in charge ofthe Publicity Department，I always helped the former president to organizelarge-scale activities．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．【高分句型】（簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人信息和具備的競(jìng)選條件）
      If given this position，I will do myutmost．【高分句型】On one hand，I will hold moreinteresting and meaningful activities，such as culture festivals，singing competitions，debates and so forth，so as to enrich campus life．On the other hand，what Iwill do is to call for students to protect our campus environment，for I firmlybelieve that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student andteacher．【高分句型】（具體闡述將會(huì)為本校學(xué)生做些什么）
      I willappreciate your kindness if you choose me as the new president．And your promptreply is warmly welcomed．【高分句型】（結(jié)尾）
 Best regards
 Li Qing

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．