Question

在學(xué)校，對于我們學(xué)生來說，與老師建立良好的關(guān)系非常重要。請就“師生關(guān)系”這一主題用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：

1. 良好的師生關(guān)系的重要性；

2. 怎樣培養(yǎng)良好的師生關(guān)系。

注意：可適當(dāng)發(fā)展，以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good relationships between our teachers and us play an important part in our study and life. Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies.

This ideal relationship depends on mutual effort. On the one hand, we should respect our teachers and their efforts paid to us. We should be ready to follow their practical advice. On the other hand, our teachers should not only be kind, friendly and patient to us,but also treat each student fairly and equally. They must be responsible for their teaching and ready to help us when we are in trouble. In a word, if teachers and we are willing to do their best, the relationship between us will be quite beneficial.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性作文。話題為“師生關(guān)系”.本文的基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱可以使用第三人稱。要點為：1. 良好的師生關(guān)系的重要性；2. 怎樣培養(yǎng)良好的師生關(guān)系。考生一定要有適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)充，可以從學(xué)生的個人發(fā)展方面說明良好師生關(guān)系的重要性。在如何培養(yǎng)方面，可以從責(zé)任心等方面展開說明。

【亮點說明】本文的亮點主要在兩方面：1.連接詞的運用，In a word, On the other hand, 和On the one hand以及高級句式，如第一段里的only的倒裝句，Only with good relationship can our teacher achieve the designed teaching effect。

考點：考察半開放性作文