Question

15．假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Mark 想了解你校的近況．正好你校正在開(kāi)展"提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)浪費(fèi)"的活動(dòng)． 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文的提示給Mark寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．
★節(jié)約用紙，廢紙回收；
★節(jié)約用電，按時(shí)熄燈；
★節(jié)約用餐，不亂花錢(qián)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；  節(jié)約thrift
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；
Dear Mark，
I'm very glad you are so interested in our school．
                                                                
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是關(guān)于"提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)浪費(fèi)"話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書(shū)信目的；二介紹"提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)浪費(fèi)"的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；三詢問(wèn)對(duì)方學(xué)校的活動(dòng)．
高分句型：
1．Water must be made full use of and now you cannot find any tap that is left running without students around．句子里made full use of表示"充分利用"；that 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句is left running without students around，代指先行詞any tap．
水必須充分被利用，現(xiàn)在不會(huì)再用流著水卻沒(méi)有人在使用的水龍頭了．
2．What's more，all of us are called on not to use our pocket money to buy some things unnecessary and some students even use their saved money to help the students in need句子里called on 表示"號(hào)召"，be called on to do 表示"被號(hào)召做某事"；the students in need表示"在困境中的學(xué)生"．
此外，我們都被號(hào)召不要用零錢(qián)買(mǎi)那些不必要的東西，一些學(xué)生甚至用他們的零用錢(qián)去幫助那些有困難的學(xué)生．

解答 Dear Mark，
    I'm very glad you are so interested in our school．Now I introduce an activity in our school to you．（表明書(shū)信目的）
   Recently our school is launching an activity to call for thrift and go against wasting．Every student is required to save paper，water，electricity and food．We should eat all the food we order．All waste paper must be collected and sold to help the poor students．Water must be made full use of and now you cannot find any tap that is left running without students around．【高分句型一】And each student should get into a great habit of turning off the light on time．What's more，all of us are called on not to use our pocket money to buy some things unnecessary and some students even use their saved money to help the students in need．【高分句型二】（介紹"提倡節(jié)約、反對(duì)浪費(fèi)"的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）
     Are there  any similar    activities in your school？Please write to me soon．（詢問(wèn)對(duì)方學(xué)校的活動(dòng)）                                                
                                                        Yours，
                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫(xiě)作文的步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開(kāi)端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過(guò)渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．