Question

7．假如你是某校學生李華，馬年到來之際，你的美國朋友Tom來信祝你快樂，并請你談?wù)勚袊�人對馬的認識，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封回信：
1．馬在生活中的作用，如：在交通、農(nóng)業(yè)方面；
2．馬的優(yōu)良品質(zhì)，如：活力、毅力、智慧等；
3．表達你對Tom的祝福，并詢問美國人對馬的認識．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當發(fā)揮，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：馬年the Year of the Horse；vigor活力；persistence毅力
Dear Tom，
Thank you for your letter and greetings．
      ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為一篇提綱類書信的寫作．文中需要表達的觀點比較清晰，只要按照所羅列的要點將相關(guān)內(nèi)容表達清楚即可，注意其中過渡句的使用和相關(guān)句式的變換運用．寫作時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱．
重要短語：
play a role in在…中起作用；First of all首先；What's more而且；At last最后；Therefore因此；such as比如；By the way順便問一下．
高分句型：．
1．Therefore，the horse often appears in Chinese idioms，such as qianlima，which means a talented person．本句中含有一個which引導的非限制性定語從句，其先行詞為qianlima．
2．Since the horse is honored as a symbol of vigor，loyalty，persistence and intelligence，people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities．這是一個since引導的原因狀語從句，主句中的主語people后面有一個過去分詞短語born in the Year of the Horse作后置定語；該句式people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities相當于It is said that people born in the Year of the Horse share such good qualities．

解答 This year，it is the Year of the Horse．Now I want to tell you something about the horse in china．（寫信目的）
The horse plays an important role in our daily life．First of all，they are useful and can help people do many things as a means of transport and a plow of fields．In the past，they helped to carry heavy goods and helped people to travel from a place to another．
What's more，the horse is a kind of friendly animal．They are kind and tame．Therefore，the horse often appears in Chinese idioms，such as qianlima，which means a talented person．（高分句型）Since the horse is honored as a symbol of vigor，loyalty，persistence and intelligence，people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities．（高分句型）（介紹知識）
 At last，best wishes for you in the New Year．By the way，would you like to share the opinions on the horse in America？（表達希望）
Look forward to your reply．

點評 本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯和句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．