Question

4．"Planning is good，but doing is better"是一句英國(guó)名言．請(qǐng)以此為題目用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文．
要求如下：
1．簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)這句名言的理解；
2．用一個(gè)具體事例加以說(shuō)明；
3．給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾．
注意：1．文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）：
2．文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定．
Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better
           ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)．文章要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（闡述句意）和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)（舉例），根據(jù)題干要求：先闡述含義，再舉例證明，最后點(diǎn)題．可以分三段來(lái)完成．重點(diǎn)詞匯和短語(yǔ)：in detail詳細(xì)的；bear no fruit沒(méi)有結(jié)果，不奏效；carry out實(shí)施；a case in point恰當(dāng)?shù)睦�子，明證；outline列題綱；achieve實(shí)現(xiàn)；combine結(jié)合；
高分句型：
句型一：a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out．without短語(yǔ)表達(dá)條件，相當(dāng)于if not；
句型二：I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps．現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)；
句型三：It came from good planning and better doing，which are combined perfectly．非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；

解答 One possible student version
 Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better
   Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do．（高分句型一）However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out．（闡述句意）
  My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point．（舉例證明）A month before the event，I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps．（高分句型二）After that，I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounciation with good public speech skills．I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner．
  I know how I achieved my success．（高分句型三）It came from good planning and better doing，which were combined perfectly．（總結(jié)點(diǎn)題）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 評(píng)分原則  1  本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分．  2  評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分． 3 詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分．  4 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性． 5 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮．英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受．  6 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次．  7  內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分．