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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
During the National Day holiday, I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside. It has been almost two years since I last saw her. In my memory, my grandma was a hardworking but strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me, she always hugged me deep. But when I gave her a hug this time, I found that she was much short and thinner than before. Her back was become bent and her hairs turned white. But luckily, she was still health. She could laugh like a child. To my happy, she could cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know he will always be there, helping me and loving me.

Answer 1

【答案】①paid a visit∧ my加to②has→had③but→and④deep→deeply⑤short→shorter⑥become去掉/become→becoming⑦hairs→hair⑧health→healthy⑨happy→happiness⑩he→she

【解析】本文講述了作者國慶節(jié)期間去看望農(nóng)村的奶奶，發(fā)現(xiàn)奶奶雖然比以前老了，但仍然像以前一樣很愛作者。

（1）paid a visit∧ my加to 固定搭配：paid a visit to...拜訪……，故在paid a visit∧ my加to。

（2）has→had 根據(jù)前面的During the National Day holiday可知，此處用過去完成時態(tài)，故把has改為had。

（3）but→and 句意：在我的記憶中，我奶奶是一個勤勞而堅強的女人。此處表示遞進的并列關(guān)系，故把but改為and。

（4）deep→deeply 此處表示抽象概念“深深地”，故把deep改為deeply。

（5）short→shorter 根據(jù)than可知，用比較級，故把short改為shorter。

（6）become去掉/become→becoming 此處用一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)或現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，表示“背彎了”或“背正彎了”，故把become去掉或改為becoming。

（7）hairs→hair 根據(jù)句意可知，此處hair是不可數(shù)名詞，故把hairs改為hair。

（8）health→healthy 這里用形容詞作表語，故把health改為healthy。

（9）happy→happiness 形容詞性物主代詞my后面用名詞，故把happy改為happiness。

（10）he→she 根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容可知，指grandma，故應該把he改為she。