Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞

2.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can’t lose it, hard-working is more crucial. So in her spare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by read other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.

Answer 1

【答案】1. whom→who/that

2. were→are

3. 去掉that

4. importance→important

5. instead后加of

6. read→reading

7. his→her

8. works→work

9. happily→happy

10. the→a

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。講述Jenny是愛好寫作的女孩。父母都是作家，夢(mèng)想成為一名作家。她認(rèn)為創(chuàng)造力和努力是一個(gè)好作家必不可少的。憑借她的努力，她在2019年的寫作比賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)，她很高興邁出了成為作家的第一步。

1. 考查定語從句。此處是定語從句，先行詞是a girl，從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞who或that，whom僅能作賓語。故將whom改為who/that。

2. 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文可知，文章使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述，主語是bothof her parents ，故將were改為are。

3. 考查動(dòng)詞不定式。分析句子可知，dream to do sth.“夢(mèng)想做某事”，dream后接不定式作賓語，that多余。故去掉that。

4. 考查形容詞。so是副詞，修飾形容詞，形容詞作表語，故將importance改為important。

5. 考查固定短語。instead是副詞，不接賓語；instead of“代替”后接動(dòng)名詞作賓語，故instead后加of。

6. 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。by doing sth.“通過做某事”，介詞by后接動(dòng)名詞做賓語，故將read改為reading。

7. 考查代詞。由上文可知，Jenny是個(gè)女孩，故將his改為her。

8. 考查動(dòng)詞。begin to do sth.“開始做某事”，to是不定式符號(hào)，接動(dòng)詞原形，故將works改為work。

9. 考查形容詞。was 是系動(dòng)詞，接形容詞作表語，故將happily改為happy。

10. 考查冠詞。根據(jù)語境，此處表示“成為一個(gè)作家”，是泛指，用不定冠詞修飾writer。writer首字母發(fā)音為輔音音素。故將the改為a。