假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處

Recently I have read an article in a magazine. It was about the mother who was worried about her son just because of he always kept his hair long. The mother thought that was not right, but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it. Different generations have different opinion on the same thing. That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". We can see them in our daily lives. Most of our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music, he always shouted, "Shut it off. It's awful!" How can we deal the generation gap?

1.the 改為 a mother

2.because of去掉of

3.unusually 改為unusual

4.opinion改為opinions

5. meaning改成meant

6.we can see them改成it

7.when改成while

8.listen改成listening

9.shouted改成shouts

10.deal 后面加with

【解析】

1. 改為 a。 定冠詞the表示特指,不定冠詞a/an表示泛指。結(jié)合句意,這里應(yīng)該是泛指,故將the改為a。

2. of去掉of。 because是連詞,其后接原因狀語從句或回答以why開頭的問句;而because of是復(fù)合介詞,其后接名詞、代詞或動名詞,或者what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句。 原句中的because of后面是一個普通的陳述句,故去掉of。

3. 改為unusual。形容詞修飾名詞;副詞修飾動詞的。這里的unusual是形容詞,修飾名詞nothing。故將unusually 改為unusual

4. different opinion on the same thing對同一事物有不同看法。既然看法是不同的,肯定就有一個以上,故將opinion改為opinions。

5. 。結(jié)合原句That is what is meaning by "the generation gap". 那就是用“代溝”表達的東西?梢缘弥颂幍恼Z氣是被動,故將meaning改為meant。

6. can see them改成it。該句的賓語就是上文說的“代溝”作為一個抽象名詞,通常用作單數(shù),故將them改為it。

7.

8. find somebody doing something。發(fā)現(xiàn)某人做某事,故將listen改為listening。

9.

10. 后面加with。Deal with固定搭配,意思為:處理…。故將deal后面加上with。

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