Question

11．假定你是李華，你在上周日搭坐102號(hào)公交車(chē)，該公交車(chē)司機(jī)的不文明行為讓乘客很憤怒．于是你向公交車(chē)公司寫(xiě)一封投訴信．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．司機(jī)的不文明行為（大聲講話、緊急剎車(chē)、態(tài)度粗魯?shù)龋��?br />2．希望盡快查清此事．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封投訴信．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要寫(xiě)清要點(diǎn)，包括：表明寫(xiě)信的目的，具體的不文明行為，提出要求．舉例證明時(shí)，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，以第一人稱來(lái)表述．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
complain about 抱怨，投訴
keep on doing sth 老是做某事，持續(xù)不斷做某事
concentrate on 集中注意力
lose one's balance 失去平衡
prevent…（from）doing sth 阻止干某事
I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast．
句中whose引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾名詞bus；not only…but also…連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)．
Then another passenger couldn't bear it，asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind．
句中現(xiàn)在分詞asking作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again．
句中hope后接賓語(yǔ)從句；should be taken被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；to prevent動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Sir，
   I am Li Hua．I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers'improper and rude behaviors．（表明寫(xiě)信目的）
    Last Sunday，I was taking the No.102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast．（高分句型一） So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving，but he didn't pay any attention．What's worse，he drove even faster．Then another passenger couldn't bear it，asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind．（高分句型二）But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance．However，he didn't apologize but said rudely"It's none of your business．"（舉例證明）
    I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again．（高分句型三）（提出要求）
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．