【題目】最近，由于很多不遵紀守禮的行為，而導致了一些惡劣事故，如：成都女司機由于不文明駕駛而遭致暴力毆打。假設(shè)你是李華，請以“遵紀守禮”為主題，寫一篇英語短文，向你校校報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）中國自古以來就是文明禮儀之邦。

（2）人人都該重禮儀、遵紀守禮。

（3）談談你認為中學生應該如何做到遵紀守禮。

注意： （1）詞數(shù)：100左右。

（2）為使行文連貫，可適當增加細節(jié)。

（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：discipline (U) 紀律 civilized文明的

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving.

【答案】

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion, both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.

China is a civilized country with a long history. Our ancestors attached great importance to “Li”---civilized behavior. Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.

As middle school students, we should be strict with ourselves in manners. Firstly, we ought to respect the old and care the young. Besides, we should behave ourselves, such as civilizedly dinning, waiting in line on many occasions and so on. Last but not least, we must obey school and society discipline, not cheating in exams.

As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息來介紹如何遵紀守禮。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on. 是非謂語短語做狀語。only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious. 使用了倒裝句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語in my opinion，such as，last but not least，as far as I am concerned等。以及副詞besides的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

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