Question

【題目】假如你是李華，剛從外國度假回來，你對度假期間的賓館很不滿意，賓館房間小，有時沒有熱水，網(wǎng)絡(luò)連接慢，食物不新鮮。請給該賓館負責(zé)人寫封信，說明情況，并要求賠償。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100 左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I stayed in your hotel a week ago. I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel. I have never stayed in a worse place before.

I was disappointed with the quality of the room, it was too small. And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower. Besides, seldom have I had such terrible food. However, I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.

I shall expect financial compensation of ￡300. Otherwise, I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文為提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。本文是一封投訴信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，三段式。第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段寫原因，也是本文的主體部分；第三段再次表達自己的要求和想法。寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。倒裝句的使用：seldom have I had such terrible food.定語從句的使用：I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure.連接詞的使用也很合理：besides，however，otherwise。