一家英語報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是“十年后的我”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想完成短文。

1.家庭：

2．工作：

3.業(yè)余生活。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

 

One possible version：

I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇記敘文，主題是“十年后的我”。在寫作時(shí)要注意從家庭、工作和業(yè)余生活三方面要點(diǎn)著手，因?yàn)樘崾拘畔⑤^少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。比如可以聯(lián)想到的內(nèi)容有健身，度假，聚會(huì)等等。在寫作時(shí)盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或者插入語以使文章層次分明，條理清晰。還要正確使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)亮點(diǎn)詞匯來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等。此外，因?yàn)槭菚诚胛磥恚砸靡话銓頃r(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文短小精悍，要點(diǎn)全面，語言簡(jiǎn)練，時(shí)態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對(duì)未來的暢想，然后從生活，工作，家庭三個(gè)方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短語In my free time , In a word , such as等介詞短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。

 

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Classical Music

Introduction

The issue of whether classical music is 1. to young people causes heated debate.

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Evidence

★ Classical music is associated only with old peonl.

☆ 2. of the audience at a classical concert are over fifty.

★ Many young people don’t3.

some music they listen to is classical.

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for producing new music.

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★ “Classical music”can refer to various 8. of music.

☆ Classical music9. from jazz to pieces for large orchestras.

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Classical music may still be10. by young people today.

 

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