Question

【題目】假如你叫李平，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你暑假過的怎樣。請根據(jù)以下信息給他回信，說明你在假期中的活動和理由。

活動	理由
休息	學(xué)習(xí)緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息
看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母	幫助他們做點家務(wù)，并給他們談了身邊的新鮮事
和朋友進行短途旅游	欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Tom,

I'm more than glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the Summer holiday.

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Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I'm more than glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the Summer holiday.

To begin with, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. In addition, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What's more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air and the trip broadened my horizons and enriched my knowledge during pleasure.

What did you do in your summer holidays? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

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【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。1.本文文法簡單流暢，不拖泥帶說，句式多樣。 2.使用了多樣詞組 3.文章行文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴密，能夠結(jié)合自己的看法，具有現(xiàn)實意義 4.邏輯鮮明，思路清晰。在考場上可謂一篇高分佳作。