Question

【題目】初級(jí)寫作：

請(qǐng)仔根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)，寫一篇關(guān)于寶島臺(tái)灣的作文。

主要內(nèi)容：

1.臺(tái)灣的地理位置。位于西太平洋，臺(tái)灣海峽把它與大陸分開。

2.臺(tái)灣是我國(guó)最大的島嶼。其面積約三萬(wàn)六千平方千米，人口兩千萬(wàn)。

3.自然資源豐富，香蕉、稻米、茶葉等農(nóng)產(chǎn)品馳名中外。

4.風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，氣候溫暖，陽(yáng)光充足，世界各地的游客紛至沓來(lái)。

5.臺(tái)灣自古以來(lái)就是我國(guó)的一部分。島內(nèi)絕大多數(shù)居民來(lái)自福建和廣東。

6.海峽兩岸人民都有統(tǒng)一祖國(guó)的強(qiáng)烈愿望。 100詞左右

參考詞匯：

西太平洋in the western Pacific Ocean

臺(tái)灣海峽 the Taiwan Strait

大陸the mainland

統(tǒng)一 reunification

平方千米 square kilometres

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Answer 1

【答案】

Taiwan is the biggest island in China located in the western Pacific Ocean .It is separated from the mainland by the Taiwan Strait. It covers an area of 36000 square kilometers and has a population of over 20 million.

It is well-known for its rich natural resources,tea,bananas,rice and tea. If you go to Taiwan,you will think that "Taiwan will touch your heart"because of its beautiful scenery.It has a warm climate with plenty of sunshine.So every year tourists from all over the world are always being attracted to its beauty .

Taiwan is part of China since ancient times.Most people living here come from Fujian and Guangdong.People both in the mainland and Taiwan have a strong desire of reunification of it.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文。本文要求寫一篇關(guān)于臺(tái)灣的短文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出。首先考生要謀篇布局，分為三段，第一段介紹地理位置和面積。第二段介紹自然資源和風(fēng)景。第三段說(shuō)明臺(tái)灣是中國(guó)的一部分，祖國(guó)人民渴望和平統(tǒng)一。在選詞時(shí)要特別注意一些地道的高級(jí)詞匯，如be located in…、reunification等。

這篇范文最大的亮點(diǎn)在于高級(jí)詞匯的運(yùn)用，讓文章文采斐然。如cover an area of 、be located in…、be separated from、have a population of以及scenery等等。另外本文中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用也很到位，如Most people living here come from Fujian and Guangdong.People both in the mainland and Taiwan have a strong desire of reunification of it。