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【題目】假定你是李華。在校報英語專欄看到了學(xué)�！坝⒄Z文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事，請閱讀啟事，并根據(jù)寫作要點和寫作要求寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。

Volunteers Wanted

Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.

寫作要點：

1.表示寫信意圖；

2.陳述應(yīng)征目的；

3.說明應(yīng)征條件（性格、能力等）。

寫作要求：

1.郵件詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.可根據(jù)情況增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫

4.不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Dear MS Chen ,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear MS Chen ,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示可知需要結(jié)合“英語文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀招募啟事，弄清招募職位所有信息和要求；2、根據(jù)寫作要點從三個方面寫應(yīng)征郵件。寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.運用了so…that…句型，以及定語從句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章還使用了大量短語，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入語Besides，以及副詞Successfully的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。