【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hoped to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions that interests me a lot, among which is Big Ben, Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my most favorite sport. I have been dreaming of watching a living football match there but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.

【1】【2】【3】【4】【5】

【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

【答案】

【1】hoped→hoping

【2】speaker →speakers

【3】improve前加to

【4】interests →interest

【5】that→ which

【6】去掉most

【7】living →live

【8】but →and

【9】probable→probably

【10】However →Whatever

【解析】試題分析：本文敘述了作者在英國的旅行經(jīng)歷。

【1】hoped→hoping現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語表伴隨，hoping to make good use of this opportunity作I am excited這個(gè)句子的狀語，表示伴隨。故改為hoping。

【2】speaker→speakers此處speaker前沒有冠詞a/an/the，且speaker為可數(shù)名詞，故應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。故改為speakers。

【3】improve前加to不定式表目的。此處improve my English為目的，故應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞不定式即to do形式。故加to改為to improve。

【4】interests →interest此處先行詞為attractions，為復(fù)數(shù)，that引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾attractions。因?yàn)橄刃性~為復(fù)數(shù)，從句謂語應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。故改為interest。

【5】that→ which此處which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句修飾football，that不能引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句。故改為which。

【6】去掉most此處favorite表示最喜歡的，與most語義重復(fù)。故去掉most。

【7】living →live此處living表示活的，現(xiàn)存的，活躍的；live表示實(shí)況轉(zhuǎn)播的，現(xiàn)場的。根據(jù)句意“我一直想看一場現(xiàn)場的足球賽”。故改為live。

【8】but →and 此處前句為“我一直想看一場現(xiàn)場的足球賽”，后句為“現(xiàn)在這個(gè)夢想實(shí)現(xiàn)了”，兩句為順承關(guān)系不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故改為and

【9】probable→probably此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾meet，probable為形容詞“可能的”，而probably為副詞。故改為probably。

【10】However →Whatever此處根據(jù)句意“不管我做什么”應(yīng)用whatever，且whatever充當(dāng)do的賓語，而however不能充當(dāng)賓語。故改為Whatever。

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