5.假定你是李華.你的美國(guó)筆友Jack給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件,告訴你他參加美國(guó)中西部"漢語(yǔ)橋"比賽(U.S.Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest) 獲得了一等獎(jiǎng),希望你繼續(xù)幫他學(xué)習(xí)中文.請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件.要點(diǎn)如下:
 1.祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng);
 2.希望繼續(xù)向他學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ),你幫他學(xué)中文;
 3.祝愿他能來(lái)中國(guó)參加決賽.
注意:
 1.詞數(shù)100左右;
 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華.你的美國(guó)筆友Jack給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件,告訴你他參加美國(guó)中西部"漢語(yǔ)橋"比賽(U.S.Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest) 獲得了一等獎(jiǎng),希望你繼續(xù)幫他學(xué)習(xí)中文.請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件..寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng);希望繼續(xù)向他學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ),你幫他學(xué)中文;祝愿他能來(lái)中國(guó)參加決賽. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
本文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),選詞得當(dāng),長(zhǎng)短句配合使用巧妙,并在句中運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子:I'm so pleased to learn that you got the first prize in the U.S.Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest.句中使用賓語(yǔ)從句;You are so great to make such rapid progress in learning Chinese!動(dòng)詞不定式做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ);I also hope you will be chosen to participate in the final contest to be held in October,which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown.動(dòng)詞不定式一般式的被動(dòng)式作后置定語(yǔ)和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句在句中完美結(jié)合.

解答 Dear Jack,
       I'm so pleased to learn that you got the first prize in the U.S.Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest.(高分句型一)Congratulations!You are so great to make such rapid progress in learning Chinese!I hope we can continue to learn from and help each other while you help me with my English and I can help you with your Chinese.(高分句型二)     
       I also hope you will be chosen to participate in the final contest to be held in October,which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown.(高分句型三)You are certain to improve and deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.And I'm sure you can enjoy your stay here and learn a lot.
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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注意:短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100詞.參考詞匯:漢字Chinese characters
Dear friends,
In recent years,many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity.As a result,our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past.In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly,we'd like to offer some suggestions:(高分句型一)
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper.(高分句型二)We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day.Besides,it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails.(高分句型三)As the saying goes,"The style is the man."Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students.So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future.
Let's take action now!
Students'Union.

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