Question

【寫作內(nèi)容】

目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生作弊的現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對(duì)此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations.”請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇英文稿。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

【寫作要求】

只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

One possible version:

Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that now a few students like cheating when they’re having exams at school & I think there are some reasons for them to do so. However, the most possible ones may go like this: there are too many exams which are too difficult but some of the students are often lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in exams because it breaks the rules of schools & and we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for exams.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱作文。寫作對(duì)象：考試中的作弊現(xiàn)象，貼近學(xué)生生活，且寫作要點(diǎn)要求具體，考生應(yīng)是有話可說(shuō)。因?yàn)樗鶎憺槟壳按嬖谛蜗�，所以本文的基本時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。另外，要注意表述的條理性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該篇范文，要點(diǎn)全面，采用兩段式，層次感強(qiáng)且做到了主次分明。此外，該篇文章用語(yǔ)恰當(dāng)（例如：“Though it is a pity, we’ve to regretfully admit that…”）。更難能可貴的是，其連接性詞/短語(yǔ)的合理使用（例如：“However, In my opinion, What's more,”）及句式的恰到好處的轉(zhuǎn)換（例如：定語(yǔ)從句“there are too many exams which are too difficult”，省略句“So when taking exams, they sometimes cheat”）使得文章連貫而自然，實(shí)為考場(chǎng)中的上乘之作。