Question

如今微信（WeChat）走進(jìn)了人們的生活，為大家?guī)�來了諸多便利，但有些人也隨之成了“微信控”(WeChataholic)，請你就此事寫一篇文章。你的文章必須包括：此現(xiàn)象的描述和你對微信的看法

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 文中需要包含提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.

There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.

However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse, relationship could break down .Last but not the least, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

That’s all. There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文寫作,話題是關(guān)于微信控，內(nèi)容要考生圍繞此現(xiàn)象的描述和你對微信的看法來展開，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成此類作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：To begin with 首先，to the taste of符合某人的品味， the majority of people大多數(shù)人， accounts for 是…的原因，be in trouble有困難，To make the matter worse使情況更糟糕的是, break down崩潰。Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.這句話使用了非限制性定語從句， There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by. 這句話使用了同位語從句。還有范文還使用了Next, Furthermore, Firstly, Moreover, Last but not the least, 這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點(diǎn): 考查半開放類作文