Question

【題目】假如你是Li Hua，你的美國朋友Peter最近因幾次考試成績不佳而感到很苦惱。為此，請你用英語寫封信安慰他，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1. 鼓勵他振作起來；

2. 提出合理建議；

3. 提出希望。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

After reading your last letter, I am sorry to learn that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

After reading your last letter, I am sorry to learn that you are feeling upset because of failing in exams recently.

Personally, as middle school students, we all should take many exams and it is natural to experience failures sometimes, so there is no need to feel too bad. Instead, cheer up and find ways to reduce your worries. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? What’s more, it’s better to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you. You can also turn to your teachers for help.

So long as you improve your ways of learning and work harder, I am sure you will succeed in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子書信：假如你是Li Hua，你的美國朋友Peter最近因幾次考試成績不佳而感到很苦惱。為此，請你用英語寫封信安慰他，主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 鼓勵他振作起來；2. 提出合理建議；3. 提出希望。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：after reading your last letter（讀完你的上一封信之后）；experience failures （體驗失�。�；explore a new learning method（探索新的學習方法）；turn to（求助于）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。