Question

1．注意：詞數(shù)100左右．
按照下列內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇題目為"人人需要朋友"的短文（題目已給出）．?
你的作文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．朋友的重要性．開闊視野；分享快樂與痛苦；互相幫助等等．
2．如何交到好朋友．（至少兩條建議）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's more，friends are like books，which can broaden your horizons．而且，朋友就像書籍，可以開闊你的視野．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends．在我看來，如果你遵守了以下建議，你肯定能夠和別人友好相處并交到朋友．
句型一 which can broaden your horizons 該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的費(fèi)限制性定語，which在從句中充當(dāng)主語，替代先行詞books
句型二 if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends 該句是一個(gè)由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，在使用時(shí)應(yīng)注意，狀語從句主從句應(yīng)遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"的規(guī)律，即主句用將來時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來
此外，還有以下短語和高級詞匯：play an important role in    in one's opinion

解答 Everyone needs friends．For example，friends will always be there to share your happiness as well as sorrow，whatever happens； when you have difficulties，friends will come and help you out．Believe it or not，friends or friendship plays an important role in your daily life．With no friendship，you would feel extremely lonely．What's more，friends are like books，which can broaden your horizons．（朋友的重要性）（高分句型一）How can you make close friends？I think first you must be friendly and honest．Second，you must be concerned about others and willing to help those who are in trouble．In my opinion，if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends．（交友辦法）（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．