Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校交換生David對(duì)清明節(jié)的習(xí)俗很感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 清明節(jié)簡(jiǎn)介；

2. 過節(jié)的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：革命烈士revolutionary martyrs

Dear David,

I'm glad that you're interested in the Chinese Qingming Festival.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David，

I'm glad that you're interested in the Chinese Qingming Festival.

Qingming Festival, also called TombSweeping Day, falls on April 4 or April 5. It has been celebrated in China for centuries. It is a seasonal symbol indicating sowing time. It is also a time of many activities, among which the main one is tomb sweeping. On this day people will remember family members by cleaning their tombs and paying respect with offerings. Schools will organize students to sweep tombs for revolutionary martyrs. Besides, people will wear willow branches and eat eggs to keep ghosts away.

Not only is it a day for commemorating the dead, but it is also a fine time to appreciate the beautiful scenes of nature. So would you like to go for a spring outing with me during the Qingming Festival holidays?

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封郵件，屬于書信應(yīng)用文。

1．審題立意： 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2．謀篇布局： 書信格式、稱呼、開頭和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段已經(jīng)給出，中間段介紹清明節(jié)及其風(fēng)俗，最后一段寫個(gè)人邀請(qǐng)。

3．關(guān)鍵詞和句子： 根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：fall/celebrate/seasonal/indicate/remember/pay respect with offering/willow branches/keep away/commemorate/appreciate/scene/spring outing/非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語/定語從句/倒裝句。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易銜接成文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，使全文銜接自然，語義流暢。